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Maidplz by =Fapel:iconFapel:

Categories Manga/Anime > Digital Media > Drawings

©2009 =Fapel
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Artist's Comments

Kiriban art for :iconkitsunerenachan:.
It's her OC Rena. I was supposed to draw her tsundere moe but failed. >: I couldn't think of a pose.
I don't like this. And the eyes/face looks stupid and bad.
Sorry, I couldn't think of a background. lmao;;

I'll start drawing art with real backgrounds after I complete my to-do list. And sad thing is that this is the size I drew it in. So small and you can see my ugly lineart at 100%.//sobb And I still don't know how to put shine on hair.....the shine looks stupid. lmao.

Brushes: [link]
Textures: [link] || [link] || [link]

And :iconkey-of-ice: is the coolest for tipping me on shading the skin! 8D

Critiques


:iconanimefreak2345:
=animefreak2345 Jul 1, 2009, 11:31:34 PM
I love how this came out! :heart: It's got a very adorable feel to it, without being too moe blob-ish, while keeping a sort of a chibi feel to it.

I love the detail in her eyes too, it's freakin sweet, and I've always had a thing for saucer eyes...and the details in her hair are good too :aww:.

Now on the other hand, her arms are REALLY, REALLY skinny compared to the rest of her body, and her hands look a bit off. Not really a big deal, since the rest of the picture grabs you in really well :). Also, her neck doesn't fit her head very well, but considering that's the style at hand, it makes sense, I guess.

One thing I really loved is how you used kind of a purple palette for her clothes, instead of the usual black and white people use for maid's clothes. It also adds to the ginormous adorability factor. I also love the expression on her face, it makes someone just wanna hug her :iconawwwplz:.

Like I said before, the impact for this is incredible. The contrast of her large eyes, and her hair really draw you in, and it's really sweet and adorable.
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=animefreak2345 Jul 1, 2009, 11:07:30 PM
Very, very nicely done! It's adorable, too :). Would it be ok if I wrote a crit on it?

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~suruki Jul 1, 2009, 11:08:56 PM
so moeee.

why are you improving so fast /wrist
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=Fapel Jul 1, 2009, 11:09:46 PM
Thank you! :hug:
Oh! Please, please do! >///<
I live on critique...but I don't get that much.;;; Thank you! :hug:
(Anyways you don't have to ask because I put the request critiques thing :))

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@m@
cuz its not shiny desu liek ur cat--er neko.
@m@
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=Fapel Jul 1, 2009, 11:09:54 PM
lmao stfu it's gay

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@m@
cuz its not shiny desu liek ur cat--er neko.
@m@
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*KitsuneRenaChan Jul 1, 2009, 11:10:40 PM
Hyaaaaaa, I love this picture. <333 So pretty~!! You drew Rena so cuteeeeeeee. Have I ever told you I love the way you color hair? D: LIke reallyyyyy love. <33

Also, the background is pretty. cc: And I want her maid headband. D8 That'd be fun to wear. <33

THANK YOU SO MUCH. <33 *glomphug*

Pfft, guess what I just found? ...the screenshot I took of your page. It was hiding in a different folder than usual.. OTL....

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=Fapel Jul 1, 2009, 11:13:30 PM
I'm glad you like it~8D
Really? DX I just made it up when I drew "Why, I'm not Shy". lmao;;;

Thanks! It was just random stamps because I couldn't think of what to draw. ;A; Haha, yeah! It's so cute~-cough-iforgotthecrossthingslmao-

XD! No problem! I'm just happy you like it~;w;<333

LOL! You should delete it now~ ;)

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@m@
cuz its not shiny desu liek ur cat--er neko.
@m@
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=asa-MiDORii Jul 1, 2009, 11:15:44 PM
Lol <3
tsunderemoemai <:

But anyways, you've been improving a lot lately. *u*

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=Fapel Jul 1, 2009, 11:16:00 PM
lmao u D;
y u up latez

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@m@
cuz its not shiny desu liek ur cat--er neko.
@m@
:iconkitsunerenachan:
*KitsuneRenaChan Jul 1, 2009, 11:16:13 PM
Well it's super pretty. <3 I can't color hair at all, soo... :'D

XDD

Of courseeeeee. <333 You have no idea how happy this pic made me. :'3333 (What's even better is that I just got done spazzing over another pic someone drew me, so this just added onto my spazzy happiness <33 )

XDD Will do.

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